“Watching the Snow Fall” to be published

“Watching the Snow Fall” will appear in the August issue of the print magazine Sounds of the Night.

Sounds of the Night, put out by Sam’s Dot Publishing, presents science fiction and fantasy tales “seasoned with sensuality.” Sam’s Dot Publishing’s other magazines include Aoife’s Kiss and The Martian Wave.

“Watching the Snow Fall” is in a series of stories about swordsmen on the island nation of Nara, a setting based on medeival Japan. Matsuo Hara lives a quiet life, until a cruel turn of events forces him to choose between his heart and his obedience to the feudal lord he has sworn to serve. This one’s a love story, but it ends in a bloodbath.

Going Paperless?

I have always been a staunch supporter of the paper and pen, so when my latest short story went from rough draft to final draft without ever being printed on paper, I had to wonder if I had taken a bold new step into the future. To be fair, I had made a number of paper notes before starting the story, but everything else was done with electrons.

I wrote the first draft of “The Gift” at weekend writing retreat. Previously I had lugged along a laser printer to these things, but the printer being out of ink, I left it behind, editing my work on screen and using a kindle for the Saturday night reading. Despite the lack of paper, all went well.

Of course, I figured I would print it out when I got home for further editing, but that didn’t happen. I ended up re-reading it and making editing notes on the kindle. With the final changes and corrections entered into the computer, it’s ready to submit, mostly via email.

The question remains if the editing process can be as efficient or effective without paper and pen, but I think it worked well for this project anyway. Some writers have pretty much gone paperless with their work. I’m not sure I’m ready to make that total commitment, but I have to admit I cringe every time I shell out $70 for a printer cartridge. And with this recent success, perhaps I’ll be doing that a little less.

“The Menace of Dupere” meets The Fringe Magazine

“The Menace of Dupere” will be published in an upcoming issue of The Fringe Magazine. Djibril Alayad, Editor of The Future Fire, described this tale as “a gripping, well-written, and intriguingly academic horror story in the best Lovecraftian tradition.”

This was the first in a series of horror stories set in, or with some connection to, the university town of Auxerre, Wisconsin. There are a handful of others, three of which can currently be read online: “The Music of Timothy Shean,” originally published in Dark Recesses Magazine, “Crawlspace,” originally published in SNM Horror Magazine, and “Old Growth,” originally published in AlienSkin Magazine.

Idea to First Draft

My writing methodology has evolved over time and by necessity varies from story to story. That being said, there is generally a definable process. At the beginning is always an idea: it could be a situation or a setting, a character, a feeling, a fragment of a dream, or any number of other things. But it’s definitely not a story yet. The tricky part is turning that idea into a story.

The process starts with some heavy brain-work. It may appear that I am just laying around on my bed, sitting in the bathtub, or staring out the window, but bit by bit I’m building the makings of a story around my initial idea. I try to figure out who the protagonist is, the central conflict, and get some sense of a beginning, middle and end.

Once I feel like I have a bit of story, I really try to refine it, sometimes in my head, and sometimes on paper. The essence of this step is telling the story to myself over and over and breaking it down into scenes. Each time I revise a little, adding new images, taking out plot that doesn’t work, refining the plot that does, until I have an outline with a well defined conflict and a clear beginning, middle and end mapped out in scenes. At this point, I may have a sense for what the story is about thematically as well.

Then comes the actual writing. Generally I follow my outline, but there are always surprises, details to be worked out, and new things to be discovered and invented when putting the words on the page. There is also the craft and the art of the language to attend to as well. Mostly I just try to plow ahead toward the end, not editing or over-thinking too much.

The editing/rewriting process is still to come, but it’s a great feeling when you get to the end and have a first draft. That flicker of an idea, whatever it was, is now a story, and despite all the work, there’s something sort of magical about that.

Paper Books Endangered?

A gift certificate led to an interesting trip to the local Barnes & Noble today. I hadn’t been there in a while and was surprised to find very few books when I walked in the door. Half the front of the store was a display for their ebook reader and the other half seemed to be games, toys, and random stuff. For a minute I wondered if they even had books anymore. It turns out they do, but almost all the paper books were in the back of the store and there did seem to be fewer of them. A quick check on the internet when I got home revealed that Amazon has been selling more ebooks than hardcovers for a while now.

Is the paper book in its death thoes? I’m not sure that’s true, but something is definitely happening. It seems to me there will always be a place for paper books, however diminished, but there’s little doubt that the system for publishing, marketing and distributing books is in a state of dramatic transformation. Where all the pieces are going to land is the subject for a lot of speculation in the news, but I feel like I just read the writing on the wall.

Also, I’ve thought about getting a Kindle.

A New Year in Writing

It’s been a good year for writing. In 2010 I finished Book 2 in The Three Earths trilogy along with a handful of short stories. I’ve been busy editing for the last few months and am getting close to moving on to further projects.

I’m looking forward to a lot of exciting work in 2011, including writing Book 3 in The Three Earths and again, as many short stories as I can find time for. Hopefully a few more updates here as well.

Best wishes for the new year!

Hail to the Wrimos

November is National Novel Writing Month! For various reasons I’m not in the game this time, but it’s a great idea: in short, to write a 50,000 word novel in a month. That’s a lofty one month word count goal that requires some serious sustained output. And that’s the point. Output is what matters in this challenge, not necessarily quality, or a coherent plot.

This is an exercise in turning off the internal editor, of taking risks, and writing from the seat of one’s pants (whatever that means). It’s the ultimate application of the principle of bad first drafts. And for some people it’s an opportunity to get out and do something they maybe never thought they would. It’s a great event to encourage writing, for seasoned writers and for first timers. National Novel Writing Month also sponsors a Young Writers Program.

Best of luck to everyone setting out to write 50,000 words this month. Novel writers, I salute you!

The WORDOS Professional Writers Workshop

The writing group I belong to, The WORDOS Professional Writers Workshop, has just gone online with a new website. We meet once a week to critique stories and discuss the craft and business of writing with the goal of improving our fiction and selling to markets.

I’m in excellent company there. Wordos members have published widely, and have won a lot of awards, including the Nebula, the Stoker, and Writers of the Future. I feel blessed to have their feedback, advice, and encouragement.

The website looks great, thanks to members who worked on it. The site features the latest Wordos news, awards, fiction links, a FAQ, writing resources, photos, and a directory (although not all the members are in there yet). Check it out. This is truly a world class group of writers.

Two New Stories

I’ve written two new science fiction stories in the last few weeks:

1. Elly hasn’t felt like herself since having her baby, but change takes on a whole new meaning when giant plants take over the world. I wrote “The Green Invasion” in a busy twenty four hours at Liz Engstrom‘s Science Fiction Weekend Workshop. It was the third such weekend workshop I’ve been to, and the company, the writing and the stories were all great as usual.

2. Klorg hopes his new body will boost his flagging business, but his plans change when he discovers it was somebody else’s body first. I wrote “Buyer Beware” for the annual Wordos Halloween reading.

I’m looking forward to sending these out soon, and writing more short stories before I start writing the final book of The Three Earths sometime after the new year.